My Maze 2

My Maze

If I were...

The Final Poem

Take your mark!

I get into a pose.

Get set.

I tried to steady my breathing.

BANG!

GO! GO! GO!

I’m off!

My hands, my head, my waist my legs, I’m in.

Glide, glide, glide.

Oh no I think I’m coming last.

You're not I said to myself.

I wasn't going to start letting my mind get the better of me.

Heart pounding.

Legs kicking like they have a mind of there own.

Eagle eyes searching for the finish line.

Chest heaving, feet kicking, PAIN PAIN PAIN!!!

Suddenly I slap the end.

Then a wave of proudness came over me.

I came third!!!

The end

By Ruby

Robot Inquiry Questions

Take a trip in side

swimming sports

                                                    Swimming sports

I see…. people just making it to the end.

I hear….Mr Kinsey in the microphone.

I feel…..a shock come over me when I jump into icy pool.

I taste…..the bitter chlorine when I swallow a gulp of water.

I smell…..the wafting scent of food.

I wonder….. if I will come first.

I see…...people staring at me.

I hear…... the scream of the whistle.

I feel…..the water gulping me down.

I taste….success in my mouth.

I smell…...the chlorine around the pool.

I wonder…...how long it will take me to get to the end

I see…...people next to me shaking.

I hear…..the water lapping against the side of the concrete pool.

I feel…...butterflies flapping in my shaking tummy.

I taste…...yucky pool water.

I smell…..stinky people next to me.

I wonder…… when my body will hit the water.

Ruby